Free children’s book manuscript review

Written a children's story but not sure what happens next?

Many of the authors I work with are first-time writers. They have a great story but aren't sure how illustration, page layouts, and publishing actually work. That's where I can help.

Send me your manuscript and I’ll review it and give you friendly, honest advice on how it could work as a children's book.

No pressure. No obligation. Just helpful guidance.

Most manuscripts don’t need major rewrites. Often, a few small suggestions can improve the pacing, strengthen the story and make the finished book work much better.

What’s included in your free manuscript review?

I’ll look at your story and give you honest, practical feedback on:

  • Story length and pacing

  • Suitability for your target age group

  • Where illustrations could help tell the story

  • Whether the manuscript feels ready to move forward

  • Likely next steps for illustration or publishing

There’s no obligation to work with me afterwards.

What happens next?

  1. Complete the form and upload your manuscript.

  2. I’ll personally read through your story.

  3. I’ll aim to reply within two working days.

  4. I’ll send honest, constructive feedback and suggest the best next steps.

If your manuscript feels ready to move forward, I’ll explain what illustration and publishing preparation could look like. If it needs a little refinement first, I’ll tell you that too.

What I'll need from you

Please tell me a little about your project and upload your manuscript.

Don't worry if you don't have all the answers yet. The more information you can provide, the more helpful my feedback is likely to be.

Your manuscript remains yours

I understand that sharing your story can feel like a big step.

Your manuscript will be treated confidentially and used only for the purpose of reviewing your project and providing feedback.

It won’t be shared, copied or used for any other purpose without your permission.